…Hiding my emotions like an enamoured prostitute.
Or an actor, trying to make his debut on this twisted scale.
Harloting my way through life, a simulated masquerade, trying not to ‘fail’.
Beneath, this masked trade hides a performer. me.
Outside lies the judging audience, silent observer. THEM.
Only one believes the performance matters and fears judgment; from THEM:
me.
Icarus with his smouldering wings.
Burning in an ocean of inexistent flames.
Written by Issa Dioume
Author’s site : Writing, Improving, Coffee
…Hiding my emotions like an enamoured prostitute.
Or an actor, trying to make his debut on this twisted scale.
This is my favorite line from this beautiful piece. I like to hide my emotions all the time but judgments are just uncontrollably everywhere. Fact of life. You are good with playing with your words that create such a relatable message through poetry. I love this ♥️ keep it up!
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Wow what a great compliment! Thank you very much for this awesome comment. I will, thank you for the encouragement! It’s very kind of you.
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You’re welcome! Pieces like this deserve to be appreciated 😘
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This is really lovely…i love the way you write …..this is a piece for me to learn wow
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Really? Your compliments make me feel embarrassed 😳 thank you. If you read something bad. Do not hesitate, I love to get criticised (weird) I see it as the best way to improve. Once more a hundred thank you 🙏
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I don’t mean,to exaggerate but i really love the way you write and keep it up….and you are welcome
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I have written a fair bit on this theme. I like your interpretation – well done!
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Oh, where can I find an example of your approach to this thematic? 🙂 I am curious now.
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Of the ones I have posted, I’d say chameleon, insist, Reward and what’s it worth…obviously in different iterations though
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Thank you ! Will go and have a look! Don’t hesitate to read more of my writing as well and leave criticism if you see mistakes I really appreciate it because I want to improve and I am French.
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Do you live in Paris?
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Je voudrais ameliorer mon francais…peut etre tu peux m’aider de temps en temps?
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You have such a flair for that punch in the gut feeling that I love so much from poetry. I’m reading and reading and each word has more of an impact than the last. Your writing is amazing. You are very talented. This piece punched me in the chest. Bravo, truly. Bravo!
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Thank you! Your compliments make me believe in my writing 🙂 it is very nice of you!
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I’m so glad! You should. You’re quite talented!
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Not at all! I welcome all form of help and assistance especially one so helpful! Thank you very much for the advice! I will follow the necessary steps in order to make my site more accessible to all. Thank you so very much!
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Glad to have been able to help! 🙂
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I still can’t believe that English isn’t your first language. I wish I could write half as prettily in French and you do in English.
Once again the imagery in this piece is just so flamboyant but simple and true to life. love it!
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Thank you! I am lucky to receive such praise. I think you write really well yourself. Thank you so much. 🙂
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