Sometimes the water flows
Sometimes the water stills
Stilling my hopes in crypts
Sometimes it rains on my face
Sometimes sun radiates off of it
Burning men like cigarettes
Sometimes I care.
Sometimes I don’t.
Sometimes I share.
Sometimes I won’t.
Blue birds fly unseen in the sky.
Only perceived when poked in the eye.
Manichean Mannequins of wonder.
Wanderers under a flattening roof
Unimpaired by water. It’s Rustproof.
Look yonder to cross the border.
As we are: birds of the same feather
Written by Issa Dioume
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Nicely done
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Thank you very much Shantanu!
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Ur welcome 😊
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This is one of your most poetic work so far. I love it
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Great job. Your final sentence was breathtaking.
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“Can life be neatly divided
into dark and light ?”
I’ll just have to ask
the mannequins of your
wonderful poem.
A toast to your post.
~ David R.
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Thank you David Redpath for this comment which gave me more confidence in this post of mine.
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Great work! I love the line about burning men like cigarettes. Great imagery!! Thank you for sharing🤗
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I like the rhyming rhythm.
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Thank you!
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Thank you very much! 🙂
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Great poem. Magnificent alliteration, ‘Manichean Mannequin’ and somptuous wild rythm. It seems the persona is outpouring his rage if I’m not mistaken. Issa, this poem; t’es un vrai pro. I’m a toujours quelquechose à apprendre de tes œuvres.
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Love this, very sweet and strong. And thank you for your support for my scholarship!
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Welcome! Good luck for the scholarship. 🙂
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☺️ Sweet, simple, direct. Lovely work.
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Reblogged this on ReBirth: The Pursuit of Porsha and commented:
Most Excellent.!!!
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Thank you so much for this comment! Thank you for sharing with the rest! I am glad you did. If you like this one I would recommend CLEAR BLUE another one of my poems. Or LIFE OF MEN my most popular ones. You may find enjoyment in reading them as well. 🙂
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I love it, it is simple, but keeps attention 🙂 and very beautiful blog, pics :)) ✌️😁❤️
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Really love this post. Beautifully crafted. Have a wonderful weekend!
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Thank you Kally! 🙂
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Sometimes we meet writers/artists who create magic – this is one of those times.
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Wow! Thank you for this compliment!
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You are most welcome!
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