Tumor, tu meurs
Like budding petals of a fleur.
Tumor, tu meurs
Like a languidly beating Coeur.
Tumor… Tu meurs
Like the mots of passants.
Tu meurs, tumor
Like the life of mes parents.
Tumor, je meurs
So be it, il était temps.
Tu meurs, ils pleurent
These are the tears des enfants.
Tôt le matin, j’irai cueillir la rosée, des fleurs du lendemain.
– Issa Dioume, 2018, 15th April
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This is what I call a very successful bilingual poem. And the ending is quintessentially French. Lovely.
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Thank you very much Jane! It’s very kind of you. 🙂
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It’s a good poem 🙂
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Ma belle amie …
graciously beautiful poetry.
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Uniquely written. I love the weaving of languages.
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Yes it’s an attempt at using some of the language tools at my disposition. Now is the age of international travelling writers! We can weave all languages to touch all hearts and minds! To bring unison and comfort as far as we can.
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Je pense it’s a bonne idée!
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Wow a beautiful blend of French and English
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Thank you very much Piyali! 😀
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The wordplay/pun is really interesting.
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Thank you very much Foolchund!
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You’re welcome. By the way, I’ve started a new blog for my French works. Do take a look whenever you have time:
https://thewritersdestiny.wordpress.com
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I will do so 🙂 promptly.
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Hello Issa, recently I have been approached by a news blog called Flyhiee. They were looking for writers willing to let publish their poems in their newly created poetry section. I have accepted. If you have any doubts or questions or willing to take part, please send them your answer on the e-mail: flyhieeofficial@gmail.com
Sincerely,
Foolchund Saahil.
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Very interesting! I am sending and email right now. 🙂 thank you for the link.
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I love the bilingual slant to this😍
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Thank you! 🙂
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😊
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Spicy and sexy––that’s what came to my mind as I take all the words in. I studied basic French 3 years ago but wasn’t able to use it so I have already forgotten most of it lol. All I remember is when you use “Tu” instead of “Vous”, this means the one you’re addressing is close to you, isn’t it? Correct me if I’m wrong though cos I’m not really certain haha
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Yes it’s a person you are more familiar with. Here the character is addressing his own brain tumour and ordering it to die. 🙂
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Oh! See, my French sucks! lol
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Not at All. You were right. 🙂
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But I didn’t get the message lol. Missed talking to you, Issa 🙂
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Hi
Thank you. I am happy to see your writing. It gives me a thoughtful thinking and am happy for that. That is always my intention to see a post that gives me happiness.
Am happy to share at least a part of that happiness and love here as am writing now.
What you said in your post is true, sometimes just a drop of that magical post in your blog is enough to get a person to be happy.
Well, If I wish to be happy is inevitable to keep the vibes flowing.
Cheers,
PATRICK
#PATRICKSTORIES
Peace ✌and Love ❤
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Thank you for your kind comment,
It means a lot. It is always a great source of nourishment for my determination to see that my prose can bring just a tiny spark of joy in someone’s life.
Issa Dioume
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Thank you! I appreciate your thoughtful response.
Such an awesome way of replying someone. Thanks. Again
As always your posts are incredible and I enjoying reading every word down till the last line. I must say that you are probably one of the excellent bloggers on WordPress that write inspired
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Also, I just posted: OSCILLATION
Would love to know your views. Love to see your contributions on it. I’m always excited for your comment. 🙂
You are welcome
#PATRICKSTORIES
Peace ✌and Love ❤
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Wow, you surprised me in the best possible way. You’ve mixed two languages and doubled the sensation and the thoughts.
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Thank you 🙏 I am glad it was to your liking.
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