Style Training With Ursula K. Le Guin, Exercise.2: Am I Saramago {2nd attempt}

My 2nd Attempt At this Challenging Stylistic Exercise. Please, do tell me how I did this time around!

Style Training With Ursula K. Le Guin, Exercise.2: Am I Saramago {1st attempt}

3rd Writing Exercise With Writing Legend: Ursula K. Le Guin 📖 ✍️

Style Training With Ursula K. Leguin, Exercise.1; Part.2

Writing Training Following Ursula K. Le Guin’s Guidance 📖 📚

Style Training With Ursula K. Leguin, Exercise.1; Part.1

Writing Training Following Ursula K. Le Guin’s Guidance 📚 📖

Style Training With Ursula K. Le Guin[Project Explained]

Detailing The Reasoning Behind My New Project to Better My Writing ✍️